Welcome to the Suck

Hello Blogoliscious. I haven't posted anything in a few days. Thought I'd bring you up to date on what's new in the Spectras trilogy. Acts 1 & 2 of Contract of War are first-drafted. And now, I agonize over Act 3. Here's what I've come up with so far.

And I don't even write romance or erotica. *le sigh* (The above is just a joke, btw. Attempting to keep myself amused until my brainmeats recharge.)

On the plus side, just found out one of my lovely clients put me in her last release's acknowledgments. Yay! It made my day. Thank you, Traci!

Guest Post: Living with the Dreaditor

G'day dear readers. Join myself and fellow editor Liz Broomfield at LibroEditing today where I'm discussing the trials of being both a professional writer and editor. A sneak peek:

We all know that voice. The one in our head that says, “My Godiva, woman, did you really just string five adjectives in a row to describe your character’s appearance?” Or, “What-what-what!? You do know that dangling modifier makes you sound like a complete goon, right?” We’ll call that voice “The Dreaditor”—the evil, amorphous being that skulks within the crevasses of our brains and tries at every turn to squash our creative voice into so much jumble-y pulp.For a lot of writers, the inner editor is worse than having Spock after he’s downed ten cups of coffee quoting bad lines from Star Trek directly into our ears in a bid to create order out of our creative chaos. “Are you sure it isn’t time for a colourful metaphor?” ~ Spock,”The Voyage Home” Or, “Nowhere am I so desperately needed as among a shipload of illogical humans.” ~ Spock, “I, Mudd”). Continued here.

Liz asks some very compelling questions that I thought I'd pass on to you all as well. Do you also hear the voice of your Dreaditor every time you write? How do you manage to not let it stifle your creative flow? Can you edit as you go along?

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Writing for Recognition

Writers write for two reasons. (1) A thirst for recognition. (2) And to release the baying hounds of unchecked and untrained inspiration that run amok inside our brainmeats and threaten our (questionable) sanity.It was just under eight years ago that I stopped writing simply to release the hounds and gave more than a split self-effacing second of thought to the possibility that someone, somewhere might actually want to read what I have to say someday. That was the moment I started writing for recognition.Yet, after the first two novels began drowning in ever-expanding puddles of their own spilling and dissolving plots, I finally quit beating my head against the many questions that kept arising (no. 1 being: why is this so hard???), and decided to seek professional help. For the writing dilemmas I was facing, that is.Subsequently, I took a lot of creative writing and editing classes, read a few books on the subjects, and, most importantly, wrote a lot of ridiculous, often hilariously silly, prose. Still, recognizing the embedded lessons of even silly and ridiculous prose is to a writer's benefit, and makes that prose valuable.And now, two completed and three to six (but who's counting?) uncompleted novels and several short stories later, I'm penning the third book in my science fiction trilogy, and finally trying to do it in a logical, structured way. You'd think that someone who spent three years crawling through the mud under concertina wire and jumping out of olive-drab-painted cargo planes for the army would have the structure thing down, but, like most stubborn and willful children (even grown ones), I somehow aspired instead to reject everything the military required of me. Except for remaining fluent in acronymese.Which brings me to the current topic. Over the last few weeks, I've been bouncing around ideas for Contract of War's anchor scenes (and here's a great summary at From the Write Angle of what those are). This process, as many of you know, is an agonizing battle of generating wonderful plot ideas, which, after the requisite analysis, you realize aren't so wonderful and murder with shameless savagery. Because no idea is ever good enough until one IS.When my gray matter finally started to ooze with sweaty exhaustion even worse than Lawson Craddock felt at the recent Amgen Tour of California, I had a flash of inspiration that told me to step back and first figure out what the hell it is exactly that drives and motivates my characters. Perhaps knowing who they are will help me better know what story eventually needs to be told about them. The notes below are a result of this process and come from using writing techniques taught by the late Jack Bickham in Elements of Fiction Writing – Scene & Structure (and if you write novels and haven't read this book, I can't help but wonder if you also like to drive a car with your feet).SPOILER NOTE: As these are notes for Contract of War, it's safe to reason that these characters will all be featured in it. Some of the mischief they are planning will likely also be in the notes. So, if you don't want to know what may go down, best to just leave it at: there's a congregation of main characters (most you've met), and they be wantin' somethin'.

Character Self-Concept Files

What is each character’s self-concept, and what turns that on its head?1. AlyAly’s self-concept is that she is a woman of action; a doer and a survivor. She was inadvertently recruited as a medic during the war thanks to her affiliation with Vitruzzi. When she ends up still in that role at Broken City, it begins to chafe at her. Her natural cynicism starts to claw at her nerves. When Quantum and Vitruzzi/Brady’s fight for leadership starts to grow, it compounds her own restlessness. She is not a politician and simply wants a regular, 3 squares/day lifestyle where she and Karl can live in relative sanity and peace. If that can’t happen, then she wants to be busy and free from overt dictatorialism (not a real word, but it should be!).2. QuantumQuantum refuses the rule of law or rule of authority, or the idea that humanity is capable of order. He is both a technophile and a caveman. Broken City’s mini-government is getting under his skin because he believes it is just the seed for a new version of the Admin. He’s an interferer, but thinks of himself as proactive and a pragmatist about human nature. An egomaniac who thinks machines are better than people, thus machines should be the ultimate goal of people. When he perceives the colony regressing into an atavistic reinstatement of Admin control, he begins looking for ways to sabotage.– Incidentally, he and Aly share this concept of authority.3. VitruzziVitruzzi is a compassionate realist, leader, and reluctant about nothing that serves to keep peace and order. Unflappable and stern, she regards herself as levelheaded and a fair judge. It’s when her own decisions cause harm that she starts to lose touch.4. BradyNo nonsense, no passes, no breaks. He’s a bulldog and a humanitarian that treats any gray area as an outright enemy. The pain and losses he’s suffered have turned him hard, but the inner Brady is one hundred percent finest-quality human. He is loyal and just, but has a hard time admitting when he’s wrong. Stubborn, like Aly, he believes himself to be a guardian of what is right, but can be too quick to decide what that is.5. DavidDavid is a joker and a mediator who doesn’t like to fight, but can handle himself in any kind. He reasons lengthily before deciding on a course of action. His loyalty to his crew can be rigid to a fault. He’s quick to think the best of people, but still slow to embrace them in his inner circle or confidence.6. KarlLike Aly, Karl is a doer. Stoic and driven, his main goals include keeping his friends safe, keeping out of the way of trouble, and enjoying what life has to offer. Having been a soldier and wounded, most of his life experience has trained him to value rules and be realistic about consequences and avoiding recklessness. Yet he’ll turn himself inside out to come to the aid of those he is loyal to.The great news is, after doing this exercise, those anchor scenes are finally done!Anyone want to share some of the steps you undertake as part of your pre-writing process?

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Turning Flat Stanley Into Stanley Tucci: A Take on Texture

When you look at a flat black-and-white stick figure drawing, you see exactly that. A one-dimensional, basic, mono-chromatic image.smoothdude via Wikimedia CommonsOften, the idea for a new novel or story begins exactly the same way. A single line of thought—what would happen if a butterfly's wings contained a map to the greatest treasure on earth, or, if defense-deployed micro-computers became self-aware  autonomous actors, would they form nano-coalitions that could infiltrate and control human minds?—is usually the same as our stick figure drawing. But we, as storytellers, are not content with drawing mere sketches. We want texture.But, what is texture? Merriam-Webster clears that right up.: something composed of closely interwoven elements: essential part : substance: identifying quality : character: the disposition or manner of union of the particles of a body or substance: the visual or tactile surface characteristics and appearance of something : a composite of the elements of prose or poetryAh, yes. Composite, interwoven elements, disposition or manner of the particles of a substance. What this is telling us is simple: Texture IS storytelling.As writers, particularly when we're just starting to cut our teeth in the world of words, we learn to break down each component, or particle, of writing into discrete steps and practice those until we get comfortable. Character description, scene setting, the overall plotting and outlining of an engaging story arc, world-imagining then building; and then the more abstract elements of setting a mood, deciding on a tone, and developing a unique writing voice.When looking at these individually, the act of writing can begin to seem formulaic. Yet it's the craft of writing that takes each of these items and turns them into a layered, compelling story that brings readers into the unique, multi-faceted world you have created. Combining the particles of a story's substance means not simply putting readers into your characters' shoes, but shoving their too-big feet into the humid, smelly, compressed insoles of your characters' ragged chukka boots with mismatched laces, one of which bears a suspicious stain on its musty canvas tongue, and neither of which will EVER make it past the threshold of a black-tie party.And that, dear readers, is what makes a texture so important. Texture is not merely detailing the facts, it’s flourishing the facts, the sensations, the pace, the who-what-when-where-how-why, and the dark matter of the universe in sweeping, calligraphic brush strokes that turn flat words into a three-dimensional masterpiece.

A bit more on texture from the experts:

Chuck Wendig - FUCK THE STRAIGHT LINE: HOW STORY REBELS AGAINST EXPECTATION

The status quo is a known quantity and so it does not demand the attention of our description — we know what a chair looks like, a bed, a wall, the sky, that tree. The straight line is as plain and obvious as a pair of ugly thumbs. We know to describe instead the things that break our expectation, that stand out as texture, that are the bumps and divots and scratches and shatterpoints of that straight line. We describe those things that must be known, that the audience cannot otherwise describe themselves, that contribute to the violation of their expectations. We don’t illuminate every tree in the forest: just that one tree that looks like a dead man’s hand reaching toward the sky, pulling clouds down into its boughs, the tree from whence men have hanged and in which strange birds have slept. We describe the different tree. The tree that matters. The crooked tree that doesn’t belong.

David Farland’s Daily Kick in the Pants—Storytelling as a Fine Art

For me, a plot is like the skeleton of a dinosaur. You could wire up the vertebrae of a T-Rex, hook up its femur and skull and other bones, and get an idea of what it looked like, but even a completed skeleton only hints at the monster. You need to put muscle on those bones to get a real idea of its composition, and then flesh to get the textures of the creature, and you’d need pigments to see its coloration. You’d need to finish by putting in things like eyeballs and nostrils, and little cowbirds living on its back as they fed on parasites. In short, the bones are just a skeleton. Even if they’re put together perfectly, it won’t bring your story to life.Artists at that time in the mediums of poetry, music, and painting were also trying to discover new ways to express themselves, so that we had various experiments cropping up—poetry that was un-metered or un-rhymed, music that was cacophonic or avoided self-resonance, and paintings that sought to draw out the viewer’s emotions by the use of color and texture rather than by portraying any realistic images, and so on.

Note: For David's fans, you may not know that his son was recently in a terrifying accident. If you'd like to send David words of encouragement, or help with his son's ongoing medical expenses, please visit: http://www.helpwolverton.com/.

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Author Spotlight: Jo Lallo on Science Fiction Inspirations

Today's treat, dear readers, is a little insight from the multi-talented, multi-genre author of Bypass Gemini and the Book of Deacon novels among others, Joseph Lallo. I asked him to visit my blog because I've been very impressed with his ability to juggle different genres and be quite successful in all, and he graciously agreed. Thanks, Jo, for sharing your time and inspirations with us!

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Not long ago, Tammy was nice enough to post a (very flattering) review of my first science fiction book, Bypass Gemini. Afterward she asked me if I would mind talking a little bit about what got me started in sci-fi. The simple answer is actually rather boring.

Back in late 2010 I'd finished writing Jadea book in my fantasy series The Book of Deacon. At the time the fantasy books weren't terribly successful, so I asked my friends what they thought I should write next. My buddy Sean suggested I write some sci-fi. I have since discovered he was trying to trick me into writing a time travel story. It didn't work... yet. At any rate, I didn't have any better ideas, so I shrugged and got to work. Six months later Bypass Gemini was finished. Like I said, not a fascinating anecdote. I want to make sure that Tammy gets her money's worth out of this post (author's note: O/), though, so let's probe a little deeper.

I'd say a big reason that I agreed to write some sci-fi is that most of my education is in science. I've got a Master's Degree in Computer Engineering after all. Ostensibly this means I know an awful lot about technology. What it actually means is that I know enough of the fundamentals to convince people that I know an awful lot about technology. Higher education has more in common with a Jedi mind trick than most people would care to admit. (: waves hand: “I know what Nyquist Frequency means...”). While my day job and some hobby projects have allowed me to put my education to use in the past, writing sci-fi would finally allow me to flex my techno-bluffing skills. I'm drawn to any career that allows/requires me to dream up farfetched ideas and figure out how to make them work.

Another reason I took the plunge with a sci-fi novel was that, while I might not have had a plot in mind for one, I had no shortage of ideas. I don't know if this is how it works for everybody, in my case most of my stories start as a pile of scenes and ideas that have formed in my head or during conversation when I should have been doing more important things. Whenever anyone makes a comment that gets me thinking, I file it away for future reference. If one file of ideas starts to overflow, I start twisting and turning them until they form into a plot. Having exclusively written fantasy prior to Bypass Gemini, I had a long list of jotted-down musings that wouldn't really work in a fantasy setting. Pop culture references, for instance (though careful readers might notice some vague Monty Python references in the fantasy). I had also always considered fantasy to be rather solemn and serious in tone—prior to discovering Terry Pratchett, that is—so I looked at sci-fi as a good chance to try out some humor.

That takes us to the inspirations behind some of the characters. Trevor “Lex” Alexander, as is the case with all of my central characters, sprouted from the story itself out of necessity. “Let's see. I need someone with an exciting skill, a job that takes him across the galaxy, and enough bad luck to be desperate for cash.” Enter the down-on-his-luck racer-turned-courier. Once I had that scaffold to build upon, I started sticking on little details and foibles, most of which I just stole from my own life. (Yes, I have been known to use corn chips instead of a spoon when eating chili.) Karter the inventor is even more me, which in retrospect is a little disturbing since he's insane. Everything from his exclusive diet of beans and rice to his attitude regarding acceptable nicknames are based on claims/rants I've made over the last few years. He's basically Jo + Unlimited Resources – Fear of consequences. Ma, his AI, started out as a sarcastic doorbell gag that evolved as I realized what a fun concept it was to have a passive aggressive computer around. Finally there's Solby. One day I said, “Hey... a fox is smelly. And a skunk is smelly. If you combined them they would be a funk, and it would smell bad, so it would have a funk (author's note: according to Jo, the collecitve noun for funks is a parliament. True fact). It works on so many levels!” Three years later...

Solby the Funk

Solby the Funk by Bubble-Rhapsody

Merchandise based on an off-the-cuff pun. We live in an interesting time. And I guess it all comes down to that. We do live in an interesting time, and trying to figure out where all of it will lead is a tremendous amount of fun. The science fiction stories I write are a combination of things I think will happen, things I hope will happen, and thing's I'm afraid will happen. The rest is just a thread to string it all together.

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Author Spotlight: Ryan Brooks and the Importance of *Spell* Check

Greetings and g'day, dear readers. I'm giddily enthusiastic today to introduce author Ryan Brooks, a friend from Down Under, who is both brilliant and wise. Please enjoy this cogent and insightful guest post by Ryan about what it really means to write and the magical spells we writers cast with every carefully chosen word.

The Importance of Spell Check

By Ryan Brooks

There is something mystic in story-telling.The act of opening a book and magically being whisked away to another time, place, or dimension is a form of enchantment that most of us have enjoyed at some time or another. We cannot deny the thrill of watching our protagonist make a death-defying leap. We could not be more concerned when our heroine suffers at the hands of a villain. We could not be more heartbroken when their pet dog, Rufus, dies after falling down a well.Words are powerful tools. When used properly they can give us access to new ideas and concepts that we might not have realized without them. The right words can shift our awareness, steal our focus, or consume our consciousness. Words bridge the gap between that which is and that which isn’t, between the real and unreal. Star Wars might not have existed before George Lucas put pen to paper, but any (worthwhile) nerd on the street will tell you that Jedis are indeed real. How could they not be, since you’re having a conversation about them?The very concept of ‘casting a spell’ itself stems from the old English ‘spellian’ meaning to tell or speak. When you open your mouth and talk, you are literally making something out of nothing; converting abstract thoughts to physical verbal discourse in an energetic transference that Einstein would balk at mapping.But, perhaps the most important way that mystical experience can be gifted through story-telling is through significance.It is the job of an author to pick and choose where the conscious awareness of the reader goes. Though the reader decides how they feel about what the author unveils to them, the author controls the omnipresent camera of narrative focus, lending significance to the ideas and concepts of their choosing. The author must decide what is important and what is not important for the tale to progress appropriately.It is the serendipitous aspect of stories, the subtle shift that makes the unbelievable believable, that truly speaks to us all. Because even in the most mundane of stories, even in stories about gritty, modern settings, even in historical fiction or crime novels or thrillers… It is the inherent significance of the causal narrative that takes hold of the reader.And it is the inherent significance of causal existence that takes hold of us as humans.****Thanks so much for sharing your wisdom with us, Ryan!****

6kumtwnrkkit8gz98g3iRyan is a writer and artist based out of the Central Coast in Australia. He is a regular contributor to the website Warhol’s Children and is currently working on his second novel, "Beneath a Clockwork Sun."

Ryan has a number of insightful and fascinating articles about cyber-punk culture, sex, politics, and a variety of likewise fascinating and fun bits listed here. Don't miss them! Learn more about Ryan at his blog and say hi on  Twitter.

5 Self-Publishing Mistakes I Made Last Year

G'day dear readers. Join Molly Greene, author of the recently released top-seller Blog It! The author's guide to building a successful online brandand me on her blog today where I'll discuss five easily avoided mistakes I made last year as an independently published author and ways to avoid doing these yourself. My greatest hope is that my experiences can be chalked up to taking one (or five) for the team. A sneak peek:

The term "indie writer" is a misnomer. Why? Because, as we all know, once you cover your keyboard for the day, your work is only 1/10 finished. Making the conscious effort to become an indie writer also means taking on the challenge of becoming your own marketer, publisher, art director, editor, and numerous other variations on these. Along with learning the ins-and-outs of, well, EVERYTHING, we inevitably make mistakes. Today, I'll share a few that I made or almost made in 2012 that I have all good intentions of avoiding this year.1. Failing to do due diligence. > Prior to the release of my second Spectras Arise novel, Contract of Betrayal, last month, I decided to hire a new artist to revamp my first book's cover and create the second's. Failing to take my own advice when I last guest posted for Molly and ask around for recommendations from friends and colleagues, I found another author's post that linked to a number of artists (though didn't specifically endorse any). Long story short, I picked an artist whose work matched my own creative vision and hired them. After they failed to meet the terms of our agreement, I started poking around the web and discovered that several others had experienced what I was going through. The good news is, Paypal, which I had used to pay the artist, has very clear grievance and claims processes. Upon calling on these, I was able to resolve the issue without any loss of money, and only minimal loss of time. The big takeaways from this experience are: Don't pick a name of out of a hat; rely on word of mouth and seek out experts to engage and learn from. Paypal is your friend. And use Kindle Boards to assist your research.Continue here for more.

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Author Spotlight: L.W. Patricks and the Art of Controversy

This post is so many things that I don't even know where to begin. First, it's a wonderful bit of advice for writers on how to push the envelope and write gripping fiction. But it's also a great opportunity to introduce you all to the wickedly funny and radically talented L.W. Patricks. And finally! His debut novel, Shadow of Wrath, is officially releasing today! Whoah! How much awesome sauce can you pack into one post? A lot. Clearly.

The Art of Controversy

Let’s face it; the worst thing for an indie author is to live in obscurity. With so many self-published books saturating the marketplace, how on earth can you climb ahead of the pile and get yourself noticed and discovered?Here’s one solution: Be controversial, be outstanding, and be different.If the first thing that pops in your mind when I say “be controversial” is to go and kick a puppy in the face and steal an old lady’s walker, then you’ve got it all wrong, not to mention the fact you probably need psychiatric help.My definition of controversial when it comes to books is the following:

  1. Do the unexpected and keep your readers guessing. Make them feel that the world you created is unique, surprising, and most of all, dangerous.
  2. Take an idea and push it to the edge as far as it can go, while still maintaining the integrity of your story. Are you writing about sex? Push the boundaries emotionally (not just physically). Tell us how the sex has destroyed this person or made this person feel empowered over others. Writing about drug use? Send your characters as close to death as possible or into situations that they can never recover from. In my case, my book Shadow of Wrath is all about violence amongst children and teens and the effects on them living in an environment where death is as common as the rising sun. I did many unexpected things in the story, pushing the boundaries of violence and danger. Ultimately, the fate of some of these characters shocked even me as I wrote the book, but I could have it no other way.
  3. Shake up the story when things are getting comfortable. Sometimes you create such a perfect little world in your story where everything’s neat and tidy and all in place like a quant little home. However neat and tidy is boring for readers and as the writer, you need to unleash the mad bull through this perfection and shake everything up into a destructive mess where your characters are left picking up the pieces. It’s in these times of change and emotional distress that the characters you created can truly shine.

Of course, along with controversy comes the backlash. But here’s the one thing I’ve learned. There is not one book in existence that can receive universal acclaim and 100% satisfaction. Your writing will bring out the best in people, and possibly the worst, and it’s up to you to decide whom to listen to. My advice is to stay focused on your story, believe in the impact its creating, and let it ride out through the turbulent waters of criticism. There’s nothing worse than being average and normal as a writer, and by being dangerous and controversial, you’re one step ahead of the marketing game.That’s it for now. Please check out my new book: Shadow of Wrath available on Amazon.  (For the cheap price of $2.99 for a limited time only).

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SynopsisIn the Arena, you’re either a killer or a victim.If survival meant murdering an innocent person in cold blood every week, could you do it? Are you able to stick the knife into your opponent’s heart while they look at you with fear in their eyes? Life in the Arena turns everyone into sinners.A homeless boy is kidnapped from the streets and finds himself imprisoned in a far more horrifying place: the Arena, a place where teenage boys fight to the death for the pleasure of various lowlifes in a modern gladiator pit.The Arena is the brainchild of Ryker, an ex-convict addicted to alcohol, gladiatorial-esque combats, and money. When not devising new ways for boys to kill each other, he’s ruling his small empire with a ruthless fist, rewarding his guards with sex slaves and punishing those who oppose him with barbaric executions.Renamed Dog, the boy from the streets must turn himself into a killing machine if he is to continue surviving, but as he leaves a trail of bodies in his wake, the ghosts of slain boys haunts him, and the violence threatens to wake a beast inside him.Allegra, a slave girl in the Arena and a victim of Ryker’s constant abuse, is his only key to salvation. She has lost everything already -- her family, her innocence, and her dignity -- while her will to live hangs on by a thin thread. Can she save Dog’s humanity before she too succumbs to the horrors of the Arena?Seeking to defy Ryker, as Dog rises to power as his champion, the stage is set for something to give in this murderous world of young gladiators.A tale about survival, tragedy, and human perseverance, the complete Shadow of Wrath is the first book in the Sins of the 7 series.Fans of edgy and controversial dystopian books will love Shadow of Wrath.************lwpatricksL.W. Patricks is the author of SHADOW OF WRATH and the literary architect behind the upcoming Sins of the 7 series with Book One: AWAKE THE GHOSTS to be published late 2013.His short fiction works has been published by Crow Toes Quarterly Magazine, Fiction and Verse literary magazine, and upcoming Denizens of the Dark. He enjoys writing contemporary fantasy with an emphasis on creating urban mythology for his stories.L.W. Patricks was born in Toronto, Ontario where he graduated from University of Toronto's Fiction Writing course. He has travelled all over the world including Germany, Netherlands, Italy, France, Spain, Czech Republic, Austria, United Kingdom, Thailand, Hong Kong, Cambodia just to name a few. His diverse experience amongst other cultures provides inspiration for his stories.He currently lives in Toronto with his wife where he enjoys the hot summer days and the cold winter nights.You can visit him at his website at www.lwpatricks.com

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Spectrum of Speculative Fiction Contest Winner is...

It has come to end, and what a fabulous ride it was! Yes, Twitter- and Wordpress- and Facebook-verse, it's true. The Spectrum of Speculative Fiction Blog Hop and Contest is over (for now). If you haven't already, please take a minute to check out author Peter Lukes and Musa Publishing to pick up even more great books, and thanks to them for organizing this great event for both readers and writers.The Amazing Thunderclap Newman, son of The Amazing Hip, has graciously accepted the Magical Hat Draw responsibilities for picking my contest's winner. Incidentally, his favorite female heroine is Saphira from Eragon.

>And The Winner Is<

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Thanks to everyone for being part of this great experience, and a huge congratulations to Ysobel, aka, Spunky Wayfarer!!!

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Spectrum of Speculative Fiction Contest

specficbanner2.jpgWelcome to the Spectrum of Speculative Fiction Blog Hop, contest, and giveaway!From March 8th to the 10th, you'll have multiple opportunities to enjoy the wit, wisdom, and writing of a top-notch cadre of speculative fiction authors, including story engineers of everything from military science fiction, to fantasy, to science fiction horror, to science fantasy, and still more shining jewels that fit in the spaces between these genres. In other words, a cornucopia of speculative deliciousness for all palettes.You're probably asking yourself, isn't all fiction, by definition, speculative? Oh dear readers, you are so right! That being said, I'll merely comment that this group of writers has a coloring-outside-the-lines habit of speculating a bit more than some.Who Are the Authors?K. Scott Lewis ~ Inner Worlds FictionThe Magical World of Peter LukesIsaac Hooke (my review of Isaac's serial novel The Forever Gate – Part 1)The Stoneforger's DenThe Official Website of T.L. SmithNyki BlatchleyW.J. DaviesFalcon's Fables, Nancy DiMauroMartin Bolton and David PillingEleni KonstantineDevin HodginsMichael K. RoseClarissa Johal ~ Writing With ScissorsAnd, of course, yours truly |*salutes* | Tammy Salyer ~ Alternative Reality EngineerWhat You'll GetMy giveaway includes an ecopy of one of my three books, Contract of Defiance, its followup Contract of Betrayal, or a short story collection, On Hearts and Scorpions (winner's choice). ALSO the winner will receive a $20 Amazon gift card (to buy even MORE books).How To Enter And WinAs mentioned in this recent blog post about Why I Write Science Fiction, one of my primary inspirations for writing SF has been the range of female characters in the media who you'd definitely want at your back in a knockdown dragout. I want to know, as SF&F readers and movie watchers, which women protagonists have really turned your knobs and why.Leave a comment on this post by midnight March 10th and you'll be entered to win. As a bonus, if you also share news of the blog hop with your social networking circles and let me know as part of your comment, you'll be entered twice. And finally, if you sign up to follow my blog, you'll be entered three times! The more entries you have, the better your chances.All entries will be very non-scientifically tossed into a hat and the winner drawn at random on March 11th. I'll announce the winner right here.Happy reading and contest-entering all! Click here for another list of all participating authors.

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Top 5 Inspirations For Why I Write Science Fiction

Literary fiction or science fiction? That's a question many successful writers may have asked themselves when they first started out. There are those who blur the lines—Ursula K. Le Guin and Mary Doria Russell come to mind—and there are those who make no bones about writing pure SF pulp. By pulp, of course, I mean unapologetic, space operatic, hard-and-fast hitting, action adventure that makes no bones about pretty prose and moralizing. Looking at Scalzi, David Weber, and John Ringo here.A trait many long-established authors eventually develop is the ability to switch from hard and fast to deep and expansive prose styles, or vice versa, at will. Yet, I don't doubt that these authors will always return to the type of storytelling they love most. The best known advice in writing is to write what you know, but really, it should be, write what you love, and I just so happen to love the grit, grime, guts, and gore one finds in a solid Honor Harrington or Alex Benedict novel. Here's why.

  1. The best female ass-kickers are all from science fiction. My unequivocal favorite all-time movie heros have all been women. From Linda Hamilton's Sarah Connor in the Terminator series, to Sigourney Weaver's Ellen Ripley in the Aliens films, followed by Milla Jovovich as Alice in the Resident Evil franchise, and finally Summer Glau's River and Gina Torres's Zoe in the Firefly series and film Serenity. While there may be many, many non-scifi films with strong female heroines, the ones that have always inspired me were those who came from SF films.
  2. Research is good for the brain. One of the greatest things about being a writer is the ability to invent and develop a brand new world and all its exciting and dangerous accoutrements. Science fiction puts the onus on writers to research all those nagging questions about physical and biological laws (What is the speed of light? How is distance in space calculated? What kind of entry arc would a fleet cruiser need in order to slip into a planet's atmosphere without damaging its hull?) while still giving a writer leeway for making up things that just maybe aren't totally realistic but still cool as hell.
  3. Invention is also good for the brain. When my patience for research or annoyance at the limits of known science have grown too big, science fiction is the perfect genre for making it up as I go along. You may want a weapon that does something specific but doesn't exist in the real world. Voila! Creativity makes it happen. Or perhaps you need a new life form, something particularly gruesome and gooey, which has never before been seen on earth. No problem; conjure away, Conjurer. (Though can you really get more gruesome or gooey than the angler fish?)
  4. Contemporary society is so...contemporary. Great science fiction books like Aldous Huxley's Brave New World, Kim Stanley Robinson's Red Mars, or Frank Herbert's Dune all jump us out of the narrow confines of normal social order and give us a vision of what life could be like if we just make a few tweaks to rational order here, kill a few stereotypes and norms there, and reorganize some expectations and beliefs over there. When what we perceive about how people behave in our own reality gets tipped on its head, incredible and unexplored ideas are allowed to flourish in new and surprising ways.
  5. And the final (and arguably biggest) reason I write SF is to prepare for the zombie alien apocalypse. Let's face it, the end is going to come. It's one thing to have a basement full of bottled water and double-barrel, slug-loaded shotguns, but the only real way to prepare for the day when hordes of brain-eating/possessing/stealing/sucking/bartering/dissecting/or squashing zombie aliens comes is to have already inured one's mind to the fact. When They appear, the people who will be best capable of survival are those who have mentally prepared vs those who simply have a few extra weapons and canned goods lying around. Trust me on this. Science fiction writers are really just survivalists doing our own version of end-of-the-world due diligence.

Bonus Announcement!

Stay tuned this weekend for a fantastic opportunity to load up on a wild range of speculative fiction from an exciting crew of writers, including yours truly. We have contests, giveaways, and a full selection of science fiction, fantasy, horror, and genres spanning the gaps between. Check back on March 8th for more.

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Worldbuilding for Non-Planetary Engineers

G'day dear readers. Join historical mystery author/IP lawyer Susan Spann and me on her blog today where I'll discuss how to approach worldbuilding when developing your novel setting. A sneak peek:

Long ago in a land far, far away, I began writing a fantasy novel. While the manuscript still sits in bits collecting virtual dust on my hard drive, I fondly remember the enjoyment that came with the process of making up an entire world from scratch. Little did I know when I was writing that trunk novel–creating maps of the geography, developing the culture and the social order, et cetera–that years later I would publish a science fiction trilogy. Yet, when people think of worldbuilding as a writing device, most of us tend to think of fantasy tales...continue here for more.

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Contract of Betrayal is Not About Space Marines. Novel Release Announcement!

Stop your grinnin' and drop your linen!

Contract of Betrayal is out! While the followup to Contract of Defiance in the Spectras Arise Trilogy does not include space marines per se, there are still enough firefights, explosions, intrigues, FTL voyages, and even space rats to keep your guns-and-guts-loving nerves a-twitching. Visit TwistedSciFi.com to read a review. As Sergeant Apone in the all-time greatest space marines film would say,

"All right, sweethearts, what are you waiting for? Breakfast in bed?"

Get your copy at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, or Kobo today!And happiest of birthdays to my muse, my inspiration, and the LOML. You are the real gift.

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Author Spotlight: Michael Fedison, Young Adult Writer

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Today, it is my pleasure to introduce you all to a new young adult and literary author, Michael Fedison. He's joined us today to discuss the November 2012 release of his young adult/science fiction debut, The Eye-Dancers, and being an indie writer. Mike has some fantastic things to tell us about the joy of writing, ways to keep going when the going gets hard, and believing in yourself.To get things started, tell us a little bit about The Eye-Dancers. What is the book about? Are there any sequels planned?eye_dancers_lowres The Eye-Dancers is (I hope!) a multi-layered story. On the one hand, it explores quantum physics principles, parallel worlds, the interconnections of things. It delves into the very essence of what we term “reality,” and, hopefully, challenges it. On the other hand, it is a story about adolescence, facing your insecurities and emotional “baggage,” and coming out the other end a better and stronger person.The book opens with a nightmare, literally. Seventh-grader Mitchell Brant dreams of the mysterious “ghost girl,” who has haunted his sleep three nights in a row. She’s only a little girl, but she is semi-transparent in his dreams, not fully “there”—which is why he thinks of her as the “ghost girl.” And she has the bluest, strangest eyes he’s ever seen. They swirl and expand when he looks into them. He is sure she is trying to lure him either to his death or to her world, wherever that might be.When he tells his best friend, Joe Marma, about his recurring nightmare, Joe says he’s been having the same dream, about the same girl, also for three consecutive nights. And when they learn their mutual friend Ryan Swinton is having the same dreams, too, they realize something very uncanny is brewing. . . .As for a sequel . . . yes! I have actually just begun writing the sequel to The Eye-Dancers, which, hopefully, will continue the adventure in a new and exciting way. It’s fun for me to jump back into this world, with these characters.Who is your favorite character in the novel and why?The science wiz, know-it-all Marc Kuslanski, who has an answer for everything, was a lot of fun to write for. But if I had to choose my favorite character—it would be Mitchell Brant. He often lies, tries to make himself sound better than he really is. But underneath all that, he’s a good person, and just needs to learn to believe in himself more. Over the course of the novel, he does move in the right direction.Who is your least?Hmm. That’s an interesting question. Honestly, there isn’t anyone in The Eye-Dancers I dislike. Everyone in the story is very flawed, very human, as we all are. But every one of them has redeeming qualities. There is no black-and-white “villain” in The Eye-Dancers. That said, I do think the most polarizing character in the book is probably Joe Marma. I think some readers will enjoy his impulsiveness, his penchant for action and take-charge nature. Others may just think of him as a bully, the kind of person who is too ready to fight first, think later.Where did the inspiration for The Eye-Dancers come from?Way back around 1990, when I was still in high school, I had a dream one night. In the dream, I looked through the front window, and out there in the street, I saw a little girl, who was only partly there—she looked like a ghost. And she had the bluest eyes I had ever seen. In the dream, she was gesturing for me to go outside, and walk up to her. But I didn’t want to. I felt a real sense of threat, danger. Finally, I woke up, sweating. It was a dream that would leave a lasting imprint.Ever the writer, I really wanted to put this mysterious “ghost girl” into a story—but no workable ideas came to me. I struggled and struggled, but eventually realized I’d have to put the “ghost girl” into an “ideas vault” and hope to come up with a story line for her at a later point. At the time, little did I realize how much “later” that would prove to be!Fast-forward nearly twenty years. One night in 2008, I had the same dream! Eighteen years later, the “ghost girl” reappeared to me. Only this time, when I woke up, the genesis for The Eye-Dancers was in place. When I went to sleep the night before, I had nothing—just a dream from twenty years ago. But the next day, I had a story, not the whole thing, but enough. Enough to go on. I eagerly began writing, and here we are!The other thing that really inspired me was the characters in the book. The four main characters are inspired by friends I grew up with. Some of the memories I shared with them, the things we’d talk about, the mysteries of the universe we’d discuss—just kids wondering, discovering. . .that inspired me, too. And the result, I hope, is a novel that is genuine, full of characters I truly care about, and a story I believe in.On to more general, writer-ly questions . . .How long have you been writing?All my life! I was scribbling short stories as far back as the second grade.What made you first pick up a pen (or laptop, computer, etc.) and want to write? Why young adult sci-fi? Have you written in other genres?I genuinely believe that writers are meant to write—that it’s a calling. I don’t even think of it as a choice. From a very early age, I had something within me that couldn’t be stilled unless I wrote. It’s been that way my entire life, and I don’t think it will ever change. The writing chooses us, not the other way around.As for young adult sci-fi, I do enjoy writing and reading about adolescence. It’s a time of discovery and learning for all of us, and I think adults often can relate to YA stories because of that. And I have always been a big sci-fi fan, so combining the two genres made perfect sense.I have written in other genres, yes. In fact, most of my short stories are mainstream, not sci-fi, and not young adult. I enjoy writing in different genres. It keeps things interesting. Besides, why restrict yourself to one area?What or who are your inspirations?I’ve loved collectible old comic books most of my life. I credit (or blame, depending on your point of view!) them for sparking within me a love of sci-fi/fantasy and the paranormal from a very young age. Comics bring with them a sense of wonder and awe, and I hope I capture some of those feelings in my own writing.Favorite authors include Ray Bradbury, Truman Capote, L.M. Montgomery, and Stephen King. And my all-time favorite TV show is the old black-and-white Twilight Zone. It’s an incredibly imaginative and creative series. So I would place Rod Serling as one of my inspirations, too.Is being a published writer what you thought it would be?Well, The Eye-Dancers is an indie book, so I knew going into it that trying to “get the word out” would be like a full-time job. And it has been. But I am enjoying every minute of it. One thing I really appreciate in our technological world today is the ability to interact with readers so readily. That has been very rewarding, and I look forward to continuing the process!Why do you write? Do you find writing to be an activity that satisfies you in ways nothing else can?Well, again, I really believe it’s a calling. I can’t not write! If I go an extended period without writing, I begin to feel restless, edgy, as if something vital is missing. Maybe not quite as vital as breathing, but awfully close!In your opinion, what makes a great story?First and foremost, it has to have great characters—characters readers can relate to, love, hate, feel for, or root for or against. There has to be an emotional investment in the characters—they have to come to life, so to speak. Without that, any story will feel flat no matter how amazing the plot is.Beyond that, for me, a great story makes us think, or see things in a different or novel way. It raises questions more so than answering them. It provokes thought. It stays with us long after reading it.Lastly, any great story has to be interesting. Riveting. Enthralling! Pick your adjective! If the story in itself is flat and bland, then the great characters or questions it raises will not be appreciated by enough readers—simply because there won’t be that many people reading it.What are some of the challenges you find in writing?Well, I have a “day job” and a busy life, as we all do. I can’t devote as many hours to writing as I’d like. That’s the biggest challenge—simply finding the time to write. I do, of course. But I still dream of the (hopefully not simply fictional!) day when I can write creatively as my full-time job.Other challenges are—when you get “stuck” in a story and you’re not sure where to go with it. Usually it works itself out, but not always. And a big challenge is making sure you revise, revise, revise, edit, edit, edit. When you think your story is finished, it’s not. Knowing when “finished” is finished is one of the biggest challenges in a writer’s life. You might want the story to be done. You might want to publish it and move on to the next project. But it still needs more grunt work.Can you give us some insight on why you chose to go the indie publishing route, and what you’d do the same and differently if you were going to start again at the beginning of your writing career?Honestly, I didn’t want to play the query letter game indefinitely with agents and publishers. I sent several queries out, but I had a “cap” number. If no agent wanted to represent The Eye-Dancers once that number was reached, I would go the indie route. There was some interest among agents, but ultimately a deal with an agent was never reached. And with so many opportunities available to the indie author these days, I figured, “Why not?” It seemed the best path available. If this were twenty years ago, or even ten years ago, I probably would have continued submitting letters to agents. The possibilities then for indie authors were nothing like they are today.I’m not sure what I would do differently if I could start my writing career over again. All I’ve ever done is write the stories that I felt I had to write because they were screaming and demanding to be written. Hopefully that’s the way it will always be.Do you have any advice for other writers? Anything else you want to mention or elaborate on?Number one, without question is—be patient, be persistent, and don’t give up. When you write enough and then share your work with others, there will be times when your work is criticized. Sometimes mercilessly so. Don’t give up. If someone’s criticism strikes you as valid, work on the issue they uncovered in your writing. If they’re criticism strikes you as ridiculous, simply let it roll off you and move on, undeterred. But keep an open mind to negative feedback. Sometimes it’s the most helpful tool a writer can use.And be persistent when trying to publish your work. Rejection slips are a part of the business. They are a guarantee, and they will happen again and again. That’s okay. Believe in your work, in your voice, in your message, and work on it, polish it, perfect it. There’s a place in this world for your stories, your poems, your essays. You just have to keep at it and keep the faith.me2Michael S. Fedison was born in Rochester, New York, and now lives with his wife, Sarah, and regal cat, Luke, in the green hills of central Vermont. Michael has been writing creatively for as long as he can remember, and has had short fiction published in several literary magazines, including Iconoclast and The Written Word. He works as a full-time technical writer and also is a freelance proofreader and copy editor. Michael has been a lover of imaginative stories his entire life. He enjoys any story that takes you by the hand, lifts you up, and transports you to another place, a new and creative way of looking at the world around us. Learn more about Mike and The Eye-Dancers at his blog.

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Elements of a Good Pitch: Thrill Us

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Even if you're going the self-publishing route, there are still a number of reasons you'll want to have a good pitch for your novel written and memorized: entering contests, afternoon tea with other writers or potential readers who want to know what your book is about, or, if you're toying with the idea of going traditional, the possibility of meeting an agent or editor at a writing conference or other writing hangout. Another good reason to develop a novel pitch is because of the practice it provides us writers of, essentially, writing a super-short piece of flash. Some say writing a novel is easier than writing short fiction because you don't have to worry about quick, direct exposition of ideas; you can simply let a story unfold at its own pace. Yet any good writer will benefit from being able to craft a short story, and a pitch is the shortest story you can tell about your novel. Which is why they are so hard.

A good pitch needs to leave readers with a sense of both the novel's main character's inner journey and outer journey, but doesn't necessarily need to spell out all of the events that might affect them. Remember the distinction between telling people what your story is about (which is what people want to know) versus what happens in the story (which is what they'll discover as they read it). The events you mention need to all be clearly associated with each other so readers get a sense of the cause-and-effect plot arc and aren't lost in a sea of disconnected details.

Formula for a four-paragraph pitch:

Hook (emotional or personal)Theme Stakes Cliffhanger ending

The first paragraph is where writers blurt out the extremely (and by extremely, I mean think of this as the oxygen that blows vital life force into the lungs of your pitch) crucial hook. Why should readers care about this story? Readers have no investment in an amorphous, fictitious world yet (unless your book is a later release of a series), so start with something that will make them emotionally or personally connected to the story or its characters. In short, make us care.

Then move into the theme. What is the overall story about? An epic adventure where destiny triumphs over love? A sword and sorcery tale where only the truth is more powerful than magic? Or something more sublime such as tolerance (sexual, racial, religious, or what have you) is the only path to salvation? Describe this theme using a few specific and descriptive, but not confusing, events from the story, and keep them as linear and as tightly linked as possible. In other words, make us think.

Then tell us why it matters. Who stands to win or lose, and what do they stand to win or lose? Is it a matter of being mistaken for a criminal and possibly being locked up for life? Or even worse, is the main character's fate inextricably linked to the fate of the world, and if one dies, so does the other? In other words, thrill us.

And finally, the cliffhanger ending should take us to the point where the greatest obstacle is unveiled and faced, while subtly cluing us in to what will happen if it isn't overcome. Leave readers scared, nervous, worried, and uncertain, but not confused, angry, or bored. In other words, make us buy your book.

When it comes to pitching to an agent, you may be interested in reading my post: If at First You Don't Succeed. For more pitch and query help, don't miss literary agent Janet Reid's Query Shark blog.

Does anyone have an example of good or bad pitch strategies or experiences? Please feel free to share them with us.

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Everyone Loves an Award!

Very Inspiring BloggerIt just tickles me titian to have been selected by the talented talebearer Michael Fedison, author of the YA novel the Eye-Dancers, for a Very Inspiring Blogger Award. Thank millions for the shout out, Michael! As all of us writers know, it's one thing to have a single, affable, tame idea to pen, it's quite another to rein in the myriad whimsies and inspirations of our imaginations that constantly squabble and vie with each other for a chance to be "born," as it were, unto the blank page. Fortunately, the invention of the web log has provided us a safe haven for the wildly incompatible ideas whirling within our brain meats, and thus, the much-cherished poignancy of being recognized as a versatile and inspiring blogger.As an honoree, here are the steps for joining the Very Inspiring Blogger Award rollsTo thank and link the blogger that has nominated you.Then post the award logo to your blog.Write a post on the nomination and nominate 15(ish) other very inspiring bloggers.Notify them and then tell seven things about yourself.My nominees in random orderFirst and foremost, my athletic, artistic, talented, incredible and amazing partner the Amazing Hip.Two magnificent, talented, and inspring authors and friends Susan Spann and Molly Greene.The indefatigable indexer of all things science fiction and friend Twisted SciFi.com.The ever informative and astute friend and science fiction/fantasy author Dale Ivan Smith.The funny and musically hip friend and YA author L.W. Patricks.A man with impeccable taste in books (*wink*), friend, and steampunk/paranormal author Scott Whitmore.A woman of amazing depth, insight, talent and vision, friend and author Sezin Koehler.There are so many, many more people I would add to this list, but my tragically over-active thinking wheels are ready to spin off to the next thing. But to finish the steps, here are seven things of note (or good blackmail material) about me.

  1. 2012 has been the most fantastic and meaningful year of my life, and, given the fact that we are still here despite it being the dreaded End of Days à la the Mayan calendar, I am unimaginably grateful for the many gifts I've been given.
  2. On a lighter note, I finally quit mis-spelling the word "occasionally."
  3. I discovered the band Lamb this year and can't recommend them more highly.
  4. I've set a goal to run my first trail marathon in 2013. Stay tuned for many tales of suffering and angst. Or maybe show reviews.
  5. I only grieved for a few days about the Lance Armstrong cataclysm. There will always be Cadel. (I hope!)
  6. Oh, and 2013 will see the release of my second novel in the Spectras Arise Trilogy, Contract of Betrayal. The cover art is already complete and I am GIDDY about it.
  7. I'll also finish outlining the final half of a paranormal/thriller novel I'm halfway through writing and outlining the third novel in the Spectras Arise Trilogy this coming year. I'm hoping for the inspiration I've been lucky enough to corral lately continues, and I wish for the same running-over cup for you all!

Happy Holidays Everyone!

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The How-To Post of All How-To Posts (for Writing)

ManuscriptWas that title a little hard to wrap your mind around? I know it was for me. How often is it you have a sentence fragment where almost every word has an "o" in it? Forgive me, lapsing into alliterative nirvana...I've had a massively wonderful week for a variety of reasons that would just bore you all to tears if I went into the deets. Suffice it to say that the relevant bit is that I've had plenty of time to finally catch up on some of the great writing resources out there and reinvigorate my brain meats with inspiring information about how to write a darn good story. For you dear readers, a short mashup of some of the greatest "how to" posts of the week.And  a tip of the glass to you in manatees-on-'roids-sized hope that these bits reinvigorate and inspire you as much as they have me, and the next couple of weeks lead to amazing new writing success for us all!

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Author Spotlight: Scott Whitmore, Paranormal and Steampunk Writer

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It is my great pleasure to introduce today's guest, paranormal/steampunk author and erstwhile naval office Scott Whitmore (visit his blog here). His novel Carpathia released in March of this year, and a what wild ride it sounds to be!

After spending years trying to locate and destroy Prince Radu Zeklos, the vampire that killed his fiancé, Daniel Jameson finds a solution to his problem when in the summer of 1882 the King of Romania decides to host an international race of “self-propelled ground machines” through the Carpathian Mountains. Four nations — Germany, England, France and the United States — are set to take part in the race, and Jameson finds allies in Major William “Stump” O’Brien, the American team’s military liaison, and Olivia Lowenby, the daughter of the man responsible for building the English vehicle and a woman who also desires revenge against the vampire for the death of her brother. Initially opposed to the race because if successful it will destroy the “traditional way of life” for Romania’s vampires and werewolves, Prince Zeklos has changed his mind. He too seizes the contest as an opportunity to achieve something he has spent years dreaming of: the creation of a new nation of the undead, Carpathia. With airships battling in the skies and humans fighting undead creatures on the ground, Carpathia is filled with action and plot twists as Jameson and Zeklos maneuver to achieve their very different goals.

Scott joined me to share his writing process and what else we can expect in this exciting series.Why do you tell stories? Where do most of your ideas come from? What was the seed of inspiration for Carpathia?I've always had an active imagination and read a lot as a kid. Wanting to write my own stories, I suppose, was a natural progression. I wrote a few short stories and started a novel when I was in middle school, but as I recall didn't get too far into it.Flash forward many, many, many years and I was working at our local newspaper as a copy editor and sportswriter covering high school sports and auto racing. That was very technical writing and I began to think about trying something more free-form.I read a book about the early days of auto racing when cars would race great distances between cities instead of on a track or circuit, and thought that would make an interesting setting.Steampunk and paranormal! What an amazing cross-pollination. Did the idea originally start as strictly one genre and morph into something greater or did the two just fuse organically? What do you like about writing in these genres?For many years the vast majority of what I read was non-fiction, history and political science mostly. For some reason I picked up a copy of Boneshaker by Cherie Priest—maybe because the story was set in nearby Seattle, where she was living at the time—and that re-ignited my interest in fiction.Boneshaker is a steampunk/paranormal story, and I was really interested in the possibilities those two genres represented in combination. So, when I decided to write my novel and I was looking for ways to make that motorcar race interesting, what's better than vampires and werewolves?What I really enjoy about steampunk is being able to play around with the timeline of real events by introducing a technology earlier than it really happened, or by developing it in a different way. Like airships, for example. They existed, obviously, but not at the time I write about them, or in the way I describe them with decks full of cannons.What, if any, limitations or drawbacks do you think they hold?I see overexposure as a real drawback for both paranormal and steampunk. Just like there seems to be a greater number of kinky sex books as a result of 50 Shades, not that long ago Twilight created a huge number of look-alike/copycat books. Steampunk has also become more mainstream, so much so that the TV sitcom Two Broke Girls had a small bit making fun of it.The challenge then becomes trying to frame stories within these genres in a way that is fresh and unique (hint for paranormal: no sparkles!). I consider my books "steampunk lite" because I don't spend time on the clothes (corsets and goggles and top hats, oh my!) and my machines aren't too fantastical. In a similar vein, my vampires, werewolves and zombies are very much influenced by the old black and white "creature feature" movies I watched as a kid on Saturday nights: lots of mystery, no teenage angst, no sparkles.Soon you'll release a follow-up to Carpathia. Did you start out intending to write a series? If not, what was the moment you realized you were going to keep going?I had absolutely no intent on writing a series. In fact, my daughter—also a writer—shared a running joke while I was writing Carpathia where she constantly asked me what the other two books of the trilogy would be about.My mother actually got me thinking about writing a follow-up to Carpathia. As the dutiful (and proud) son, I sent her a copy but fully expected she would either stop after the prologue or not bother to read it all. Much to my surprise she read it and engaged me in a lengthy discussion about the plot, why certain things happened, etc. At the end of that talk she wanted to know when the sequel would be done.As I mentioned earlier, I'm a big fan of Cherie Priest's steampunk stories—Boneshaker, Dreadnought, and Ganymede— which are set in what she calls the Clockwork Century, her version of history. I like the way her stories exist within the same universe and feature some of the same characters, but are not direct sequels.I decided to follow Ms. Priest's formula and create what I'm calling the Carpathia Timeline, with the follow-up being the next entry. Set thirty years later, some of the same characters come along and there are definitely some cool references for those who've read Carpathia, but the story can stand on its own, too.Now that you're already two books into the Carpathia series, what's next? How far will it take us?When I write it, the next book in the Carpathia Timeline will probably skip ahead another thirty years. The plot floating around in my head right now revolves around an organized crime gang war in Chicago in the late 1940s or early 50s, with werewolves on the run from Communism muscling in on the existing crime families.I've also had several ideas for shorter stories set before and after the events of Carpathia and the follow-up. There could well be an anthology, or perhaps just some novellas. One of my all-time favorite series is C.S. Forrester's Horatio Hornblower books, which did not follow a set chronology. In the first book, Hornblower is a senior officer while his middle and early naval career are detailed in later novels.I would also like to write something outside of the Carpathia Timeline and have had some ideas for a dystopian/sci-fi story and a military/spy thriller.After your retirement from the Navy, you worked as a sportswriter and copy editor for a small newspaper in Everett, WA, and were prolific writing about motorsports. How does one go from that to this?As I put on my Twitter bio (Shameless plug! Follow me @scottwhitmore), I consider myself to be an observer of life, and both jobs, the Navy and the newspaper, provided me with some great memories of colorful characters and unusual situations. Throw that stuff into the hopper with an active imagination that hasn't been allowed to run free for thirty years, and you may just get a novel or two.Do you have a muse? What do you do to call it/s/he when you need it/her/him?Not that I know of. There may be someone working behind the scenes, quietly, though.What is the best piece of writing advice you have for new authors?When I was learning to be a copy editor from an experienced man at the newspaper, he told me the best editors do not change the writer’s voice. If you ask ten people to read your story you are likely to get 10 different opinions on “what works,” “what doesn’t work,” “what should stay the same,” or “what should be changed a little/a lot.”By all means, listen to them, but remember you wrote those words in that way for a reason. That’s your voice, the way you hear/see/think the story should be. Never forget: it’s *your* story. Listen to them, thank them, think about what they have to say, and then be alright with the notion of not following their advice if you don’t feel it is true to your voice.In your opinion, what makes a great story?A good friend who is an actor sent me a copy of Save The Cat: The Last Book On Screenwriting That You'll Ever Need by the late Blake Snyder. In the book, Snyder states there are only ten types of movies—such as "Dude With A Problem," "Monster in the House," and "Golden Fleece"—and then he details how every movie ever made falls into one of them. It's pretty funny but very enlightening, and I think equally applicable to books.I think what sets a great story apart from a good or so-so one is how it fits into and also breaks free from whatever category it falls into. It may be a character, a setting, a really cool plot twist or just thrill-ride action, but the stories that transcend the norm have something about them that stands apart.About a year ago I read Berserker by William Meikle, which can use "Vikings versus Yeti" as its tagline. Sounds a little cheesy, right? Like something you'd see on the SyFy channel on Saturday nights? The truth is I *loved* that book. The characters were interesting and unique, the premise was unusual but executed very well, the writing was descriptive and smart; bottom line it was just a ton of fun to read. Will Berserker win any literary awards? Maybe not, but I recommend it to anyone looking for some fun hours of escapism with a great story.What are some of the challenges you experience in writing?After retiring from the Navy I learned I suffer from depression. I wrote about the experience in my blog, but long story short I probably have always had it and the regimented nature of military service actually helped me to function very well with it. I'm on medication right now which helps to even the road out, keep the lows from becoming too low and the highs from too high, but it can also knock my creativity for a loop. There are days when I know I should be writing, but the spark just isn't there.Also, for someone who claimed/claims to be an editor, I can be terrible with grammar and spelling.Who are your favorite authors or books in your genre? In other genres?Cherie Priest and O.M. Grey are great steampunk/paranormal writers: anything by them; Steven Montano's Blood Skies books are really cool paranormal/sci-fi; Jo Nesbo's Inspector Harry Hole books and Jill Edmondson's Sasha Jackson Mysteries for crime fiction; and Alistair MacLean's early works for action/adventure.At the risk of sounding like an apple-polisher I really enjoyed your Contract of Defiance (blogger's note: o/) as well as Mike Berry's Xenoform and John-Paul Cleary's Convergent Space for sci-fi. Paul Anthony has written novels in a number of genres, crime as well as historical fiction, and they're all good. Patricia Fulton's The Drought was a really cool horror story which reminded me a lot of early Stephen King.I'm sure to be missing some folks who will, when they read this, likely string me up for not mentioning them!What is your writing process? Are you a dedicated everyday writer, or catch-as-catch can? Do you have any special rituals or activities you do that help you prepare to write?For the novels I found writing every day to be best, in the morning usually, with the goal being around three thousand words per day. As I noted above, there are days when writing wasn't in the cards, so I try not to be too strict about setting deadlines for myself (which is why I'm not doing the NaNoWriMo).I also blog about book reviews, my military service, auto racing and anything else that crosses my mind. Those posts are usually written when the thought hits me rather than by a set schedule.For the novels, I spend a lot of time thinking about the characters or through the major plot points before sitting down to start writing. I don't outline, but I will jot down notes and ideas. Strangely, a lot of my story ideas come while I'm in the shower or walking my dog, Maddie. I can't tell you how many times I've stood dripping wet over my desk scribbling an idea on a notepad or sending myself an email from my smartphone while sitting on a park bench.Can you give us some insight on why you chose to go the indie publishing route, and what you’d do the same and differently if you were going to start again at the beginning of your writing career?At the suggestion of a friend, while I was at the newspaper I self-published a book of my writing called Short Track Saturday Nights that covered one season at the local racetrack. I went through CreateSpace and had a ton of fun doing it. Because the topic was so specific and the level of interest would be very limited, I never thought about a "traditional" publisher.A few years after that my daughter Katherine finished her debut novel, Rhythm of Redemption, and she asked me to edit it and help her try to find a publisher or agent. What an eye-opening experience. We researched likely agents and publishers, wrote and re-wrote query letters, got advice from other published writers, etc., etc., but the only replies were from vanity presses we hadn't even submitted to (how they got wind of the book, I'm not sure).Although disappointed, we went ahead and self-published her book and when it came time for Carpathia I decided not to pursue the "traditional" route very hard. I sent one or two query letters, and got a response that said the premise was interesting but my writing was not. I have a company, 40 West Media LLC, for my freelance writing, so we slapped that on the book as publisher and sent it out into the world.I've done my own book covers, too. To me having the control over every aspect of my books is a lot of fun. I don't work on my own car — too complex and hard—but I'm happy to tinker with formats and fonts. Hello, geek!The development of Indie and self-publishing is just the natural outgrowth of technology. First the web and computers revolutionized the way we buy things like books, music and movies, and now that technology allows us to create and share our own music (iTunes), movies (YouTube) and books (Kindle, CreateSpace, Lulu, Nook, etc.). We're all artists now, or at least we all can be. Of course, the collateral damage is the near elimination of record shops, bookstores, and Blockbuster. That's evolution, I suppose, and I'm sure the folks working in traditional publishing are as concerned about their futures as I am excited about my prospects as an Indie.If a traditional publisher approached me, of course I would be interested in hearing what they had to say. Do I expect that to happen? Not at all. :) And that's fine, because I'm having a lot of fun as it is.Anything else you want to mention or elaborate on?Nothing other than thanks for interviewing me. And get on that next book. I want to know what happens to Aly! (blogger's note: o/)***Thanks a million for this insightful look into writing and the indie publishing track, Scott. Your comments on good writing advice—knowing when to accept advice when it comes to keeping your unique writer's voice—are absolutely invaluable. Keep us updated on when your next book comes out.Here are some of my biggest takeaways from Scott's interview. Feel free to share your own. If you've read Carpathia, please add your plug or hop over to Scott's blog and share your thoughts.

  1. For a werewolftastic good time, run out (or link over to Amazon or Smashwords) and get your copy of Carpathia!
  2. In paranormal, no sparkles, ever.
  3. Scott has some of the best taste in books ever ;). Scott also really needs a waterproof digital recorder.
  4. Talk to Scott's mom for some good novel feedback.

Scott WhitmoreMore about Scott:Born and raised in the Midwest, Scott Whitmore turned to writing after 20 years of service in the US Navy. He has written for The Herald, a daily newspaper located in Everett, Wash., with a circulation of 45,000. He has also contributed to RacingPress.com, Sports Northwest magazine, SBNation.com, and Racing in America. Scott currently works as a freelance writer and marketing consultant, specializing in motorsports. He wrote and published Short Track Saturday Nights, a book about the 2008 racing season at Evergreen Speedway, Washington’s only NASCAR home track. His debut novel, Carpathia, is available at Amazon.com and Smashwords.com.

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New Contract of Defiance Review

Props for Contract of Defiance from a man who knows his military scifi. Nice! Thanks, Scott.

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Claws of the Cat Cover Reveal and Contest

Welcome to Day 1 of the Claws of the Cat cover reveal tour in which you are privy to a first glimpse of what is going to be one of the HOTTEST mystery novels of 2013. Do you feel that tingling in your toes? I do. In my toes, not yours, er...The first novel in Susan Spann’s Shinobi mystery series doesn’t release until July 16, 2013, but the fun begins today. For the next three days, three different blogs will post a piece of the cover – a clue to the final cover art for Claws of the Cat. Susan will reveal the full cover this Friday, November 9 on her blog (www.SusanSpann.com).There’s also a contest involved. Leave a comment on Susan’s blog some time Friday for a chance to win a $20 Barnes & Noble gift card!Here’s your first clue to the mystery:So… what are those pointy objects in the image? And what are they sitting on? Take your best guess…A little more about Claws of the Cat:When a samurai is brutally murdered in a Kyoto teahouse, master ninja Hiro Hattori has just three days to find the killer before the dead man’s vengeful son kills both the beautiful geisha accused of the crime and Father Mateo, the Jesuit priest that Hiro has pledged his own life to protect. The investigation plunges Hiro and Father Mateo into the dangerous waters of Kyoto’s floating world, where they quickly learn that everyone from an elusive teahouse owner to the dead man’s dishonored brother has a motive to keep the samurai’s death a mystery.Claws of the Cat is available for pre-order at Barnes & Noble (http://www.barnesandnoble.com/), Amazon.com (http://www.amazon.com/), Powell’s Books (http://www.powells.com/) and independent booksellers near you.You can find the next two clues tomorrow at Julianne Douglas's blog, Writing the Renaissance (www.writingren.blogspot.com) and Thursday at Between the Sheets (www.heatherwebb.net/blog/) – and don’t forget the full cover reveal and contest happening Friday, November 9 at www.SusanSpann.com.

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