writing process

Outlining In Situ

One of the interesting twists that comes with identifying as a writer is the conflict that is sometimes created when that self-identification clashes with other “facts” one knows about oneself.For instance, I am sickeningly organized. The first words I write in the morning are often the day’s to-do list (even for such mundane items as “catch up on email”). I’m the person who ensures every Christmas card sent has the picture facing the envelope flap so that it’s the first thing friends see when opening the card. I’m the person who can tell you exactly how many books are sold at each distro site each day, and the person who has more spreadsheets than bedsheets.Which should automatically make me a plotter, right? I probably have outlines so detailed it only takes me a few hours a day to flesh out scads of scenes, right? Right? HA! If my life depended on it, I couldn’t outline my way into a child’s picture book, much less an adult fiction novel. It’s an odd dichotomy in this writer’s soul, but one I suspect many others share.Needless to say, my writing style is very chaotic, discovery, unchronological, and nonlinear. And I embrace this. I love being as surprised at what ends up on my pages each day as I hope my readers will be. Yet, in each novel I write, there comes a point when it has overwhelmed my own mental capacity for recalling the specific details of each scene that need to be carried through the entirety (despite the database I maintain for some such things), or I forget the order of scenes, or forget to carry all the characters from the scene’s beginning through to the scene’s end, and so on. And when that happens, it’s time to implement the strategy that I secretly anticipate the way a skydiver anticipates that shock of their parachute opening: the in situ outline.I reached this point with my third novel in the Spectras Arise trilogy last weekend, to my great elation (which also created a slurry of rewriting to reintegrate the aforementioned forgotten characters back into their scene. Which begs the question: If one can get through most of a scene without the characters anyway, how relevant are they? But this is subject for another blog post). This process is what I'll  share in today’s post.

Steps for Outlining In Situ Using MS Word’s Heading Style Feature

Three MS Word features to familiarize yourself with first:StylesSidebar, specifically the document map paneOutline View

  1. Step 1. Write in chunks. My stories evolve beginning with multiple files for different pieces that I think up at random times (process name: chaos). I use MS Word, as many of us likely do, and often Evernote when I'm not at my computer, but even those who write using other software applications like Scrivener or Pages likely have several different files to track. The goal, of course, is to eventually merge them all into one bulbous (read: brilliant) mass of narrative. Each file should be named in a way that will help you quickly recall what it contains.

  2. Step 2. Merge your chunks and delineate your scene breaks. Once the merging begins and the novel/puzzle begins to form a whole, you’ll need a way of demarcating different scenes and chapters. I tend not to decide on my chapter breaks until the first draft is complete, but where a scene should break is usually pretty obvious. Different authors use different symbols or techniques, but I often use “#” and center it on the page. Whatever you choose, it should be unique enough to be easily found using Command-F (Control-F for PC users).

  3. Step 3. Name your chunks and scenes and apply heading styles. Here’s where the real job of outlining, and the fun, begins. Go through your document and label each of your scenes with a bare bones description of its events and germane details. Next thing you know, bada-boom bada-bing, you have OUTLINED. As if you've attained godhood, you have just manifested ORDER! The power! I know—I get a little excited. Meanwhile, as you go through and write your one- or two-line scene descriptions, apply MS Word’s heading style feature and make each of these descriptions a Heading 1 or 2 (or whatever level you want). This allows you to invoke a hugely useful tool that will save you tons of time: the document map pane.

  4. Step 4. View in document map pane. You know when you’re writing away, really grooving to your scene, totally entrenched, and then suddenly, whammo, you hit a wall with the sudden realization that there’s a pivotal detail or person or event that you can’t remember clearly, but you really have to know right now in order to get this scene just right? If you’re old school, you might use the scroll-and-pray method of trying to find that tidbit, or you might make an educated guess as to about where it is and hope you can find it before this life-changing moment of being in the zone dissipates like so much anticipation at a Black Friday grand opening as soon as the doors unlock. Or, wisely, you tagged that thing in your scene heading and can click right to it from your document pane. You’re probably already imagining how much time you’re going to save and how much more productive your writing time will be with this nerdgasm tool. Bonus strategy. I will often have ideas while writing for other plot twists or events that I either know need to be written or simply want to remember to explore. I’ll add these ideas to the end of the working document or in place in the scene (usually starting with a tag like SUBPLOT or SCENE at the beginning) formatted with a heading style so I can quickly reference them visually when looking over my outline in the document map. This helps keep idea generation alive and thriving even while working on a specific scene.

  5. Step 5. MS Word’s outline view. Working with styles and MS Word’s built-in outline function gives you the glorious option of being able to get a ballpark view of your novel’s scenes and overall development and trajectory. The side benefit is that you can collapse and expand your scenes, even your paragraphs if you prefer working at a more granular level, and move them around seamlessly. So much easier and less anxiety inducing than highlighting, cutting, and pasting chunks of your prose willy nilly.

By the time you're halfway through writing your novel, you should have a pretty good idea about what's to come. Though every writer’s process and approach to writing is as different as every writer, introducing an outline at this point helps me focus on where I've been and develop a next-steps plan for how to get where I'm going. I learned my process through trial and error as much as through asking others how they do it. While there are numerous writing software programs that can do much of what I’ve described above (and even much more), this is a simple, fast, and well-honed process for me. I hope I’ve been able to give some of you an idea or two of new things to try or helped fill in a gap you’ve been wrestling with in terms of how to go about part of your own process. If you have a tip or trick you love to use, feel free to share it below.

Guest Post: Living with the Dreaditor

G'day dear readers. Join myself and fellow editor Liz Broomfield at LibroEditing today where I'm discussing the trials of being both a professional writer and editor. A sneak peek:

We all know that voice. The one in our head that says, “My Godiva, woman, did you really just string five adjectives in a row to describe your character’s appearance?” Or, “What-what-what!? You do know that dangling modifier makes you sound like a complete goon, right?” We’ll call that voice “The Dreaditor”—the evil, amorphous being that skulks within the crevasses of our brains and tries at every turn to squash our creative voice into so much jumble-y pulp.For a lot of writers, the inner editor is worse than having Spock after he’s downed ten cups of coffee quoting bad lines from Star Trek directly into our ears in a bid to create order out of our creative chaos. “Are you sure it isn’t time for a colourful metaphor?” ~ Spock,”The Voyage Home” Or, “Nowhere am I so desperately needed as among a shipload of illogical humans.” ~ Spock, “I, Mudd”). Continued here.

Liz asks some very compelling questions that I thought I'd pass on to you all as well. Do you also hear the voice of your Dreaditor every time you write? How do you manage to not let it stifle your creative flow? Can you edit as you go along?

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Writing for Recognition

Writers write for two reasons. (1) A thirst for recognition. (2) And to release the baying hounds of unchecked and untrained inspiration that run amok inside our brainmeats and threaten our (questionable) sanity.It was just under eight years ago that I stopped writing simply to release the hounds and gave more than a split self-effacing second of thought to the possibility that someone, somewhere might actually want to read what I have to say someday. That was the moment I started writing for recognition.Yet, after the first two novels began drowning in ever-expanding puddles of their own spilling and dissolving plots, I finally quit beating my head against the many questions that kept arising (no. 1 being: why is this so hard???), and decided to seek professional help. For the writing dilemmas I was facing, that is.Subsequently, I took a lot of creative writing and editing classes, read a few books on the subjects, and, most importantly, wrote a lot of ridiculous, often hilariously silly, prose. Still, recognizing the embedded lessons of even silly and ridiculous prose is to a writer's benefit, and makes that prose valuable.And now, two completed and three to six (but who's counting?) uncompleted novels and several short stories later, I'm penning the third book in my science fiction trilogy, and finally trying to do it in a logical, structured way. You'd think that someone who spent three years crawling through the mud under concertina wire and jumping out of olive-drab-painted cargo planes for the army would have the structure thing down, but, like most stubborn and willful children (even grown ones), I somehow aspired instead to reject everything the military required of me. Except for remaining fluent in acronymese.Which brings me to the current topic. Over the last few weeks, I've been bouncing around ideas for Contract of War's anchor scenes (and here's a great summary at From the Write Angle of what those are). This process, as many of you know, is an agonizing battle of generating wonderful plot ideas, which, after the requisite analysis, you realize aren't so wonderful and murder with shameless savagery. Because no idea is ever good enough until one IS.When my gray matter finally started to ooze with sweaty exhaustion even worse than Lawson Craddock felt at the recent Amgen Tour of California, I had a flash of inspiration that told me to step back and first figure out what the hell it is exactly that drives and motivates my characters. Perhaps knowing who they are will help me better know what story eventually needs to be told about them. The notes below are a result of this process and come from using writing techniques taught by the late Jack Bickham in Elements of Fiction Writing – Scene & Structure (and if you write novels and haven't read this book, I can't help but wonder if you also like to drive a car with your feet).SPOILER NOTE: As these are notes for Contract of War, it's safe to reason that these characters will all be featured in it. Some of the mischief they are planning will likely also be in the notes. So, if you don't want to know what may go down, best to just leave it at: there's a congregation of main characters (most you've met), and they be wantin' somethin'.

Character Self-Concept Files

What is each character’s self-concept, and what turns that on its head?1. AlyAly’s self-concept is that she is a woman of action; a doer and a survivor. She was inadvertently recruited as a medic during the war thanks to her affiliation with Vitruzzi. When she ends up still in that role at Broken City, it begins to chafe at her. Her natural cynicism starts to claw at her nerves. When Quantum and Vitruzzi/Brady’s fight for leadership starts to grow, it compounds her own restlessness. She is not a politician and simply wants a regular, 3 squares/day lifestyle where she and Karl can live in relative sanity and peace. If that can’t happen, then she wants to be busy and free from overt dictatorialism (not a real word, but it should be!).2. QuantumQuantum refuses the rule of law or rule of authority, or the idea that humanity is capable of order. He is both a technophile and a caveman. Broken City’s mini-government is getting under his skin because he believes it is just the seed for a new version of the Admin. He’s an interferer, but thinks of himself as proactive and a pragmatist about human nature. An egomaniac who thinks machines are better than people, thus machines should be the ultimate goal of people. When he perceives the colony regressing into an atavistic reinstatement of Admin control, he begins looking for ways to sabotage.– Incidentally, he and Aly share this concept of authority.3. VitruzziVitruzzi is a compassionate realist, leader, and reluctant about nothing that serves to keep peace and order. Unflappable and stern, she regards herself as levelheaded and a fair judge. It’s when her own decisions cause harm that she starts to lose touch.4. BradyNo nonsense, no passes, no breaks. He’s a bulldog and a humanitarian that treats any gray area as an outright enemy. The pain and losses he’s suffered have turned him hard, but the inner Brady is one hundred percent finest-quality human. He is loyal and just, but has a hard time admitting when he’s wrong. Stubborn, like Aly, he believes himself to be a guardian of what is right, but can be too quick to decide what that is.5. DavidDavid is a joker and a mediator who doesn’t like to fight, but can handle himself in any kind. He reasons lengthily before deciding on a course of action. His loyalty to his crew can be rigid to a fault. He’s quick to think the best of people, but still slow to embrace them in his inner circle or confidence.6. KarlLike Aly, Karl is a doer. Stoic and driven, his main goals include keeping his friends safe, keeping out of the way of trouble, and enjoying what life has to offer. Having been a soldier and wounded, most of his life experience has trained him to value rules and be realistic about consequences and avoiding recklessness. Yet he’ll turn himself inside out to come to the aid of those he is loyal to.The great news is, after doing this exercise, those anchor scenes are finally done!Anyone want to share some of the steps you undertake as part of your pre-writing process?

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Worldbuilding for Non-Planetary Engineers

G'day dear readers. Join historical mystery author/IP lawyer Susan Spann and me on her blog today where I'll discuss how to approach worldbuilding when developing your novel setting. A sneak peek:

Long ago in a land far, far away, I began writing a fantasy novel. While the manuscript still sits in bits collecting virtual dust on my hard drive, I fondly remember the enjoyment that came with the process of making up an entire world from scratch. Little did I know when I was writing that trunk novel–creating maps of the geography, developing the culture and the social order, et cetera–that years later I would publish a science fiction trilogy. Yet, when people think of worldbuilding as a writing device, most of us tend to think of fantasy tales...continue here for more.

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